Your homepage, rewritten so the right client says: that's me.
I take your page, your offer and everything your clients have ever written to you, and I rewrite your homepage from the first line to the last, in your voice, tested on a stranger, delivered in your private Voice Room. You paste it in. The page does the first 45 minutes of every call for you.
Everything a stranger reads first, done.
Homepage, top to bottom
Headline, sub-headline, every section, every button. Written in your voice, tested on a stranger, ready to paste.
A private page
Every rewrite, its Stranger Test score, and why it works, yours to keep and reread before any future writing.
The sentences that are yours
The exact phrases, scenes and signals your clients already use about you, collected so you can carry your voice into LinkedIn, e-mail and offers yourself.
From what you've stopped noticing to a page that works.
You answer a short intake and send me what your clients say about you. I find, shape and check. You correct once. Done.
No briefs. No 40-question forms. No calls unless you want one, a 45-minute call can be added.
Apply
Three questions and your page. I read it and reply within one working day: yes, no, or “not yet, here's why”.
Intake
You pay and send me your voice material: testimonials, e-mails, anything a client ever wrote to you.
Find · Shape · Check
I write your homepage and test every line on a stranger. It lands in your Voice Room with the score and my notes.
One round of corrections, then live
You tell me where a line isn't you. I fix it. You paste it in.
Imagine that an expert would check your site and tell you exactly where you are losing money and clients.
Why? Because of the words you use to describe what you do.
A written read of your homepage from me personally, the exact sentence a stranger stops at, the value you've buried, and one line rewritten. Normally the first paid step of 1-on-1 work. This week, on me, for the first five who apply.
Five per week. When they're gone, they're gone until Monday.
Your homepage, rewritten in your voice
£997£1,997first ten clients · then £1,997
- Homepage rewritten from the first line to the last
- Built from your own voice archive
- Your private Voice Room, yours to keep
- One round of corrections, in writing
- Stranger Verdict (£197) credited in full
- Optional: 45-minute call, added separately