Your page, read and rewritten by me.
For the founder or coach who'd rather not learn it. Two ways in: a 48-hour written verdict on your whole page, or your homepage rewritten in your voice and delivered in your private Voice Room. No calls needed. Everything in writing, so you can reread it before every future sentence you write.
You've tried writing it yourself. Twice.
“I've rewritten my homepage three times and it still sounds like everyone else.”
Because you're too close to it. You are the last person who can see your own value.
“I don't have two weeks for a course. I have a launch in three.”
Then you need it done, by someone who does this every week, not learned from scratch.
“I hired a copywriter. It was polished. It wasn't me.”
Copywriters start from the page. I start from you, a linguist listening for the sentence that was always yours.
Start small. Go all the way if it lands.
The Verdict shows you exactly what's wrong and fixes the five lines that matter most. The Obvious Page fixes everything. Whatever you pay for the Verdict comes off the Obvious Page.
The Stranger Verdict
£197one-off · credited against the Obvious Page
- Your whole homepage read the way a stranger reads it
- Every sentence where she stops, and why
- The five lines to change first, each one rewritten in your voice
- A 10-minute video from me walking you through it
- Delivered in writing within two working days
The Obvious Page
£997£1,997introductory price for the first ten
- Your homepage rewritten from the first line to the last
- Built from your own voice archive: what your clients already say about you
- Delivered in your private Voice Room with before / after and the Stranger Test score
- One round of your corrections, in writing
- Your £197 Verdict credited in full
By application, I read your page first and say yes, no, or “not yet, here's why”.
From one paste to a page that does the explaining for you.
You send your page and whatever your clients have ever written to you. I listen for what you've stopped noticing. Then I write, and you watch it land in your Voice Room.
No briefs to fill in. No 40-question forms. No calls unless you want one.
Start with the free readFree read
You paste your page. A stranger reads it. You see where it leaks.
Stranger Verdict · £197
I read the whole page. Every stop, the five lines to change, each one rewritten, plus a short video.
The Obvious Page
Your homepage rewritten in your voice and delivered in your Voice Room, with the Stranger Test score and my note on why each line works.
Live, and portable
You paste it in. One round of corrections included. Your Voice Room stays yours to reread before anything you write next.
Imagine that an expert would check your site and tell you exactly where you are losing money and clients.
Why? Because of the words you use to describe what you do.
A written read of your homepage from me personally, the exact sentence a stranger stops at, the value you've buried, and one line rewritten. Normally the first paid step of 1-on-1 work. This week, on me, for the first five who apply for The Obvious Page.
Five per week. When they're gone, they're gone until Monday.
Here's how I choose.
- you already have clients who love you
- you're better than your page makes you look
- you can send me what your clients have written to you
- you'll tell me when a line isn't you
- you're still deciding what you offer
- you want ten pages, not one that works
- you want to sound impressive rather than be understood
- you need it by tomorrow