0Free · takes you 3 minutes
Paste your page. I'll show you where it's losing money, time and clients.
Copy the text of your homepage, your About page or your freebie into the box. You'll get a short, blunt read, not a template, not an audit deck.
- 1Where a stranger stops reading, the exact sentence, and why.
- 2The value you've buried, the thing you do that your page never mentions.
- 3One sentence rewritten, so you see the difference on your own words, not someone else's.
No call. No pitch in the reply. If I think you'd benefit from the course or from working together, I'll say so in one line, and leave it there.
?What happens next
Three sentences. One stranger. One honest read.
Your read lands in your inbox. Then, once a week, one idea from Make Them See on turning what you know into words a stranger can see. If you want the whole page read and fixed, the Stranger Verdict takes 48 hours.